Thursday, October 2, 2014

Journal 16

The grossest food that I've ever consumed was my aunt's jambalaya. It didn't really look or taste like regular jambalaya, it was dry and didn't have stuff that normally went in it like sausage,chicken, rice, shrimp, celery and seasoning. Instead of chicken and sausage it had ground beef and bacon. She put so much stuff into it that I can't even remember all of it. I had no choice, I had to eat it or I couldn't get up from the table or get cake. So instead of eating it I threw most of it under the table. Whenever me and my family go to her house, we eat before we get there because she always tries to make us something, so we don't have to eat any of the food that she attempts to make.

2 comments:

  1. When listing the ingredients the word or should replace and after celery, the contraction can't should be can not two sentences later, two sentences later me and my family should be my family and I, the contraction don't should be do not in the last sentence. I have never had jambalaya before but the way you described it I am not sure I want to.

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  2. No contractions, more than 150 words, I've never had jambalaya before, I think, but I link ground beef and bacon.

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